VOA request at Shenzhen on 23. June, is it close or open?

You said that it's your first time to Shenzhen. Then May I know where you have been to other cities of mainland China before or not? If it is also your first time to mainland China, I think it will be hard for you to get an on-arrival visa form the China Embassy or consulate in Indonesia in Advance. Anyway, the visa office at Luohu will be on service on 23. June.

Thank u Emma, I had been in Beijing several years ago, but this time I go with my family & my mom, ..So do you mean it will hard for us to cross to Shenzhen ?.. :(..

But I expect we will get visa for tourist.. because we want to visit some tourist scene like WOW & Dong Men.., I read from several blog information, they just get the VOA without any burden about have not gone to China before..
If I show my hotel booking deposit, would it convince them... perhaps ??.. .. really wish for the VOA.. :) many thanks Emma

Yeah, your hotel booking deposit may be some what helpful for you on -arrival visa at Shenzhen. It's possible for you to get the visa at the Entry port of Shenzhen.